Identify the sentence in the passage below that should be either rewritten or removed.
Shakespeare's Cymbeline has much to say about the virtue of loyalty. In the
opening act, Imogen's marriage to Posthumus Leonatus is seen by her father
as disloyalty, for he intended her for a higher station. Loyalty is highly
regarded in my family. Throughout this play, Shakespeare demonstrates that
loyalty is a timeless value, not to mention highly problematic.
A. Loyalty is highly regarded in my family.
B. In the opening act, Imogen's marriage to Posthumus Leonatus is
seen by her father as disloyalty, for he intended her for a higher
station