Can you revise my paragraph

you should take out the part about the dog but overall it good

Explanation:

You need to look over your punctuation in the first line. In the first line, Instead of  "while there" I would put " while attending". Instead of "she", I would put "Nesbit"

Explanation:

i think the anti-race spokesman is working to achieve equality between whites and blacks and to encourage blacks to shakespeare's theory

yah idk ether buddy good luck finding it let me know when u do find it my boi