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English, 02.03.2021 09:50 lilblackbird4

Read the sentence. Our garden where we grow plants is filled with colorful red flowers like tulips and yellow flowers that are called daffodils. Which revision corrects the wordiness and redundancy in this sentence? A. We grow flowers in our garden that are colorful like red tulips and yellow daffodils and it is filled with them.

B. Our garden is filled with red tulips and yellow daffodils.

C. Our garden, filled with plants, has colorful flowers, including red tulips and yellow daffodils.

D. Our garden where plants grow is filled with colorful flowers like tulips and daffodils that are red and yellow.
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