This journal entry will be completed in two parts. In this lesson, you will examine how different sentence types can add variety and interest to writing. Part of your learning will involve revising your own writing to improve sentence variety.
Now, before continuing with the lesson, you will complete the first half of your entry.
Write a short, four- to five-sentence
paragraph about a topic of your choosing.
Then, after you have completed this lesson, come back to the paragraph you wrote. Analyze your writing to identify
areas where you could revise using different sentence types to add interest to your work. Revise the paragraph using
the techniques you have learned. Your completed journal entry should have both your original and your revised
paragraph.
Please don’t do this for the points or I will not give you a