Im writing a conclusion for an essay i need help if anyone can help? I just wanna know what i should add or improve on ? This is for AP english Looking Through the Eyes of a Woman in the 19th and 21st century

Every Women will experience and view life differently but it's what is influenced through the public eye and what is expected during the time ,that really contributes to that. This is shown between the 19th century and 21st century women and how with time change comes different views on life and oneself. These two centuries cannot be easily compared, this is why there is a deep change in women going forward. As for all resources provided it can be determined that the fight for rights and equality sparked high during the 19th century although for the 21st century etiquette and manner are more significant for this century. But why really is there such a difference between both centuries? The expansion in modernity from technology to education caused this extreme difference. This is because having now different resources and influences, the role of women has change extremely.

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Explanation:

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)