Re-write a part of your favourite childhood story / fairy tale. Write 2 paraghraphs (120 words). Use 6 different past tense forms (pozitive, negative) and 4 different passive structures (positive, negative). Use 5 of these words: screamed, muttering, mumbled, said with a sigh, said bravely, moved cautiously, leapt, triped, hurried on, turned anxiously. Make at least 3 changes to the original story.

closer examination, however, finds the mcdonald's kind of job highly uneducational in several ways. far from providing opportunities for entrepreneurship (the lemonade stand) or self- discipline, self-supervision, and self-scheduling (the paper route), most teen jobs these days are highly structured — what social scientists call “highly routinized.”  

true, you still have to have the gumption to get yourself over to the hamburger stand, but once you don the prescribed uniform, your task is spelled out in minute detail.  

can you give us the passage> ?

explanation:

based on the biblical principle proverbs 16: 32, i agree with the author of the passage "better is it that it takes longer to be angry than the strong " to the extent that i share the philosophy that the nobility of heart demonstrates the strength of a person. those who are very proud, get angry easily and show their anger toward others are really weak, but those who are noble and do not constantly obfuscate or contain their feelings of anger, are strong people

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