This is an example of the narrator's
thoughts
1) "Doodle was five
years old when I
turned 13. I was
embarrassed at
having a brother of
that age
who couldn't walk,
so I set out to teach
him."
The narrator was It makes me It shows how selfish
embarrassed that think that the the narrator is
his little brother narrator really because he only
couldn't walk so he doesn't care for wanted to teach
decided to teach doodles but doodles how to walk
him how to walk, feel like you
cause he was
swim, climb trees, should have an embarrassed.
and run
open mind for
the narrator.
I
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1) "Doodle was five

years old when I

turned 13. I was

embarrassed at

having a brother of

that age

who couldn't walk,

so I set out to teach

him."

The narrator was It makes me It shows how selfish

embarrassed that think that the the narrator is

his little brother narrator really because he only

couldn't walk so he doesn't care for wanted to teach

decided to teach doodles but doodles how to walk

him how to walk, feel like you

cause he was

swim, climb trees, should have an embarrassed.

and run

open mind for

the narrator.

I

Detailed Analysis

(put the above

explanation

together)

Explanation:

the following key ideas correctly express the key sentence.

restate key idea: most people can learn to swim in ten short lessons.

restate key idea: the majority of water-accident victims require mouth-to-mouth breathing.

restate key idea: an empty, tightly closed gallon jug will support a tired swimmer.  

restate key idea: first aid is to prevent accidents as well as assist in rescue.

explanation: the key idea needs to have the same topic as the key sentence (drowning and safety).

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