I'm in my school's GT Language Arts (I'm in 8th grade) We have been working on research essays (mine's specifically about the European Witch Hunts of Early Modern Europe) and I wanted to know if anybody could direct me to websites where I can get my essay peer-reviewed. If anybody knows websites, where I can get my essays reviewed, analyzed, and commented on that, would be great! I'm really striving to perfect my essay as best I can.

the correct answer is b. in order to explain a point clearly in an essay, it is always better to include a clear example of your ideas. including an scenario in which a family is affected by consumerism will support your argument as well as supporting details, such as quotations from experts and statistics. option a could be correct, but statistics and quotations are supporting ideas rather than clear explanations. choices c and d are simply inadequate. they do not add information about the effects of consumerism, rather they are strategies for engaging the reader

whatever is after like is what is being compared they are comparing bumping into you like they are scared to catch germs you have and to you being contagious

the scene now shifts back to the shelby plantation in kentucky, where  aunt chloe  has just received the letter tom wrote her with little eva's . mrs. shelby tells her husband about the letter, in which tom says that although his new family is kind, he still longs to return to his "real home."

mr. shelby, in the meantime, has still been plagued by debt. mrs. shelby offers to raise money, especially so that they can buy tom. mr. shelby becomes angry, and his wife lets the unlikely hope drop for the present. chloe then calls for mrs. shelby and asks if she could be hired out as a pastry cook in louisville in order to earn money for tom. mrs. shelby gives chloe her blessing.