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Because trying difficult maneuvers in an airplane without an instructor can prove fatal. One Monday soon after I had made my solo flight. I was up practicing some
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maneuvers. They were the most technically difficult feats a pilot is asked to perform, but such as figure-eights, slow flight, and steep turns. After about two hours
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I became bored with these maneuvers and decided to try something different. I had heard some old-time pilots talking about air-starting a plane (run on sentence) this is similar to roll, or clutch-starting a car. But it is done in the air. I decided to give it a try. I flew the plane to 17,000 feet; seven thousand feet above the rocky terrain; I shut off the engine. With the engine off, the plane began to sink rapidly. Ignoring the feeling of doom in the pit of my stomach. I pointed the nose of the plane toward the ground. When the airspeed indicator said I was speeding toward the ground at 130 miles per hour; I began to step on the rudders alternately, right , left, right, left, to turn the nose of the plane so that the wind would catch the propeller and spin it. My altitude dropped to 14,000 feet, the prop was not moving. I started to move the rudder faster, right, left, right, left. But still nothing. The ground was rushing toward me, just over 2,000 feet away, I still had no power. With less than 1,000 feet left; I realized I had not turned the key to back on. I wiped the sweat off my palms I turned the key to “on” I gave the rudder one last movement right, then left. With the wind screaming by me the prop turned once, then again, and finally the engine started. I pulled back on the yoke, the yank of gravity pressed me back into my seat, pulling the skin on my face tight against my cheekbones. I was within ten seconds of dying it was not the best feeling. Take my advice and never try a new maneuver without an instructor. He can find your faults; and possibly save your life!

because of all the immigration, america became one big melting pot. the diversity of cultures from all over the world made america somewhat divided as well. people that immigrated stayed with their kind, and their traditions, while native born americans stayed with their kind and their traditions. normally, people born in american scorned the immigrants as well. the new religions also divided america. in summary, it took away from the american culture and identified america as the "melting pot."

she look beautiful

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i love it she is now my favorite character

in a place once known as north america, now known as panem, is a very rich city surrounded by twelve districts. every year because this very rich city, known as the capitol, is so rich and likes to think they control all the districts - which they do - there is something known as the hunger games! this is where two children, one boy and one girl from each district from the ages of twelve to eighteen, have to leave their families and compete in the hunger games, a live event that is aired on tv's all over panem. when katniss everdeen, aged sixteen from district 12, has to volunteer to take the place of her twelve-year-old sister prim after prim's name is called forth to become the 23rd member to compete in the 74th hunger games, she promises to prim that she will win! katniss doesn't believe she's coming out alive - but she's not going down without a fight.

because district 12 is so poor, katniss has been close to death many times from starvation but she's made it through it. but this is a different kind of close to death; this katniss doesn't know if she can survive.

she doesn't want to hurt, or kill anyone but when it comes down to it katniss' instinct is to survive. but when she starts to have confusing feelings about the boy from her district who is also her fellow contender, things get worse, and then she teams up with the girl from district 11 and only one person can survive. but who will it be? will her feelings get the better of her? will she let someone else win so they don't have to die? if katniss is going to win she's going to have to be brutal. she's going to have to kill!