how does paragraph 69 and 70 develop the reader's understanding of the children ( on commit the veldt and plz used more detail in explaining this)​

in this alternate universe, renaissance romeo is now seventeen, an apprentice to a glass maker in venice. modern romeo is planning to go to college. what major do you think he’ll elect?

no its not a run on sentence however i think you meant wet suits not sours also a run on sentence would be like surfers surf all winter long in southern california by using wet sours to keep them warm and the live their all year long  

we were in the middle of the pacfic ocean when a puffer fish the size of a dolphin   ate us! we lived in the puffer fish stomach for 3 weeks! after awhile we got hungry and the only thing we had to eat was the puffer fishes teeth which were the size of dogs!

this is a tall tale i know it sounds crazy but its true