how could sentence 8 be revised? Millions of Chinese people were apprehensive about the start of a new year, but the hardships of poverty and famine faced them.

In large cities such as new york city, a majority of citizens often take public transportation and leave their cars at home what is wrong with this text and visual aid

Ineed simplifying this thesis and making it easier to understand for the reader (more concise) "no matter how religious one may be, one’s faith tends to change under unexpected and challenging circumstances."

Review the theme beauty exists within each person which line from beauty best communicates this theme