Please, provide a correct and understandable answer. (ASAP) Direction:
Look at the picture and write a paragraph composed of 5 sentences
or ideas that are mostly relevant to the
topic.
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From March to June, we can see an increase in positive cases. In March, less than 5000 people gave positive results, almost half of the people recovered, and a small number of people died. During April, there were more recovered people than positive cases, and the deaths descended in contrast with March. In May, there was a considerable increase in the number of positive cases, almost 25000 people were infected and less than half of the infected people recovered, and there were less than 5000 deaths. Lastly, in June, there were 35000 positive cases, 10000 recovers, and a slight increase in deaths, but never superior to 5000.

Explanation:

In this paragraph, we explain the graph. Each sentence describes a month, commenting on the number of deaths, positive cases, and recovers. Besides, there is a comparison with the numbers of the previous months. Also, we can write an introductory sentence where we give a general idea of what we are seeing.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.