Does this STUDENT writing sample use sources correctly?* Case: 7
Source: Morisy, Michael. "Extinct' Woodpecker Found." Cornell Daily Sun 29
April 2005: 1, 4.
The search for the woodpecker began earnestly after a Feb. 11, 2004
sighting by a kayaker in Cache River National Wildlife Refuge. A report of the
sighting eventually worked its way to Tim Gallagher, the editor-in-chief of
Living Bird, the Cornell Lab of Ornithology's quarterly magazine.
Student Writing Sample # 1
Occasionally, species once thought extinct resurface when researchers
examine possible new habitats. The ivory-billed woodpecker, for example,
has just been rediscovered in the wild by Cornell researchers, who launched
a search after an amateur sighting in February of 2004 (Morisy 1). Works
Cited Morisy, Michael. "Extinct Woodpecker Found." Cornell Daily Sun 29
April 2005: 1, 4.

Read the sentence. the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing only about the same as a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be printed and still look good, it made loads of money. which best revises this sentence to create a more formal style and tone? *the great wave was as cheap as buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made and still look great, people started making piles of money. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, costing about the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look exquisite, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave cost next to nothing, practically the same as a double of noodles. since mass quantities could be produced and still look awesome, it became highly profitable to sell. *the great wave was inexpensive to purchase, similar to buying a double of noodles. since lots of copies could be made that still looked amazing, those who sold it made tons of money.