(1) Hiring Jone for o position in your restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to all (2) with her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, Jane is
an ideal candidate for this position (3) As her previous employer, 1
have seen her a bunch of times make it her business to solve problems
- especially those caused by others (4) Furthermore, customers
frequently praised her for making a great effort to ensure that they had
a positive experience (5) Hiring Jane will prove to be a decision
nobody will regret
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone
throughout?
A. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, I have often
seen her take personal responsibility for solving problems - even
those caused by others.
B. Replace sentence 2 with with her superior organizational
capabilities, competency at associating with colleagues, and
universal sense of answerability Jane is an idyllic competitor for
this task
c. Replace sentence with Jone should be bred because your
teotaurant would be benefitted by her employment
D. Replace sentenced with Multiple customers have commended
her specifically for the way she just gets in there and makes
people hapu