HEL Read the following paragraph and answer the question:

The day I got my first job, I was thrilled. Though I was still a teenager, I felt like I was suddenly part of the larger picture; I had become an adult. A contributing member of society. By walking into an establishment, filling out an application, speaking to a manager, and accepting a part-time position, I felt I had finally entered the real world.

Which of the following is a correction for the sentence fragment in the paragraph?

The day I got my first job. I was thrilled.
I was a contributing member of society.
By walking into an establishment.
Filling out an application. Speaking to a manager.

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The day I got my first job. I was thrilled.

Explanation:

In the original paragraph this would be considered a run on sentence, hence you would need a semi colon. However, there was none implied.

the rhetorical devices that he used in "common sense" are syntax for his sentence structure and pathos for his emotion against the british unfairly treating the "americans" and logos of what documents that what happened to the pilgrims when they had the mayflower compact and how that the british were wanting to have one religion but the compact said for any religion to be accepted.

sis. it's been a while since a read that and had that class so i can't answer for u