Read the entry from Bruno’s a blog about animal welfare I encourage everyone to do what they can to help animals. Animals cannot fend for themselves, so it is up to us to protect them. So you might think, "What can I do to make a difference? I’m just one person." Well, you can make a major difference. Last year alone, more than twenty thousand dogs and cats were rescued and adopted into loving families. The effort of each person counts and has a huge impact.

How can Bruno further develop his claim in this entry?

Include links to stories of animals being adopted.
Show images of animals being groomed.
Provide a video that teaches people how to train their animal.
Show images of dogs playing at a park.

answer:

a. "there, said he, there is something for you."

explanation:

"said he" should not have been part of what is in the dialogue.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.