Read the paragraph from a personal narrative. It may have seemed like an ordinary day to everyone
else, but to me, it couldn't have been further from it 2
Today was my first day working as a waitress at Pete's
Pizza Haven, and I could not have been more excited.
3
In fact, I was so excited that I rushed to get ready
much faster than I typically do. ^ "I'm ready to go!"
shouted, bouncing down the stairs and flying into the
kitchen, where my mom was making breakfast 5 "
have so much to learn and don't want to be late,"
declared for emphasis. 6 My mom just grinned and
placed a steaming plate of eggs before me.
Which best revises sentence 3 to make it more
precise?
o I had so many grand plans in my head for the
money I would soon be making, and I hurried to get
ready as quickly as I could
O With visions of trendy clothes and piles of spending
money dancing pirouettes in my brain, I took a
shower and got dressed in record time,
As I rushed to shower and be ready on time,
thought about all the different things I could do with
the money I would soon be making.
Because I was so nervous, I could not stop thinking
about my new job even as I rushed to shower and
get ready faster than I ever had

i don't really know the circumstances. i personally think not due to it not being fair for all parties and how hated i'd become if i thought it was a good thing.

could you provide an image?

at nineteen years old, nicole c. kear's biggest concern is choosing a major--until she walks into a doctor's office in midtown manhattan and gets a life-changing diagnosis. she is going blind, courtesy of an eye disease called retinitis pigmentosa, and has only a decade or so before lights out. instead of making preparations as the doctor suggests, kear decides to carpe diem and make the most of the vision she has left. she joins circus school, tears through boyfriends, travels the world, and through all these hi-jinks, she keeps her vision loss a secret.

when kear becomes a mother, just a few years shy of her vision's expiration date, she amends her carpe diem strategy, giving up recklessness in order to relish every moment with her kids. her secret, though, is harder to surrender - and as her vision deteriorates, harder to keep hidden. as her world grows blurred, one thing becomes clear: no matter how hard she fights, she won't win the battle against blindness. but if she comes clean with her secret, and comes to terms with the loss, she can still win her happy ending

googles summry you can summarize this in your own words