Honest opinion on my essay that I have written. Here it is: My favorite story that I would choose to tell to younger children would be a story about perseverance. The book is called ¨The Darkest Minds¨ and it is all about how children fight through their lives due to a special power they have recieved from a chemical that was put into their brains before birth. The government locks the children in vile camps and segregates them by color. Many children escape and are forced to live a secluded life, away from society.

No matter what obstacles they face and no matter how many friends and family they lose, they keep fighting for what is right. Some children join together and form groups to stay safe. Some stay on their own. Some have to go through so much to keep the ones they love safe and some think about themselves before anyone else. For some children, it does not matter if the government, controlled every movement they made and lied to the world, they can understand that what the government is really like. There scared.

The reason why I would choose ¨The Darkest Minds¨ to tell to younger children is that first, I think the story is phenomenal. The story shows love, bravery, perseverance, selflessness, and the will to stick together through light and dark. The story shows that we humans have to stick together to be able to get through obstacles together. The more we split apart, segregate and judge each other, the more this world becomes split.

I think that’s really good. Though I have not heard of The Darkest Minds I still think you are right.

At the end of the second paragraph it says, "There scared." Change it to, "They're scared."

Explanation:

You did a great job!

Brainliest?

1. c- the tunnel project was worthwhile.

2. b- to inform about the value of the tunnel project

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)