Short story 200 words that start or end with "Susan will never forget what happened that day" ​

Hello there i have a friend named susan she told me this story when she gre older and i never forgot what happened to her. She said when she was coming back to her house after school, she said she heard a women screem so loud. she was shocked and came to help but a man told her not to help. she was scared because it looked like she did not know that man. I went to the man and when i came close to him i saw he was way taller then her. He said he was her friend i saw she was drunk so i waited and then he started pulling her to his car. I went to my car and drove after them. I called the police then the police came and told the guy to get away from the girl he was walking normally untill he passed by me. He got his belt in his waste and tryed to take me i was so scared. A boy from my school pushed me and he got Hit by the man. The police were not looking but they heard my screamed and they arrested the man. She said she still wonders to this day what would of happen if the boy from my school did not come. Susan will never forget what happened that day.

honestly you should not write it the word placement is not right and this does not sound right so i think you should write it this way. the life lessons i refused to learn, taught me the hard way this sounds way better you should try it! hope this is very !