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California's Glass Beach is an amazing place to visit. The beach there isn't sand, but colorful bits of glass that
have been polished smooth by tumbling waves.
Glass Beach in California is amazing. The beach is made of broken glass. There is no sand, only glass. Waves
have smoothed and polished the glass. The glass is found in many colors.
Glass Beach in California is just so amazing! Instead of sand the beach is made of bits of broken glass in all
sorts of colors that has been smooth and polished by waves.
California's Glass Beach is named for the glass that makes up the beach. The glass, in all sorts of colors, is
smoothed and polished, by waves. Amazing!
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English, 21.06.2019 19:00
What background knowledge would best support this inference about mario?
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Read the passage first of all if someone says your dream is impossible, they’re wrong. you can’t prove that something is impossible-all you know is that[it] hasn’t been done yet. people said no one could scale mount everest but in 1953, sir edmund hilary and tenzing norway gazed down upon the world from it’s summit. people said that man could not fly, but in 1903, orville and wilbur wright made the first sustained powered flight in a heavier-than-air machine. people said, “okay, we admit that someone could climb mount everest, and we admit that man has learned to fly, but no one will ever, ever walk on the face of the moon.” if we can send three men a quarter of a million miles away and bring them home safely, is there any great task we cannot accomplish? which identifies the textual evidence that best supports the claim: the authors purpose is to persuade? a: the author shares historical information about the wright brothers. b: the author states that men have walked the moon. c: the author states that others who think your dreams are impossible are wrong. d: the author wants to know what tasks we cannot accomplish.
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English, 22.06.2019 03:50
What is the effect of the haiku structure on this poem? how does the line structure describe the subject(s)? and how does a haiku compare to a rhyming and longer poem in terms of its effect on you as a reader?
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