After many decades of human manipulation, English bulldogs are so far from their natural ancestors that they commonly suffer from abnormalities, such as small windpipes and closed nostrils. Our efforts to breed so many of these dogs have diluted the bloodline, thinning and weakening it further with every generation. Rather than creating a sustainable breed of dog, we have opted for an unsupportable dog breed that cannot be maintained for much longer. The word manipulation has a connotation in this passage.

the word manipulation has a negative connotation in this passage.

Explanation:

it is negative because the words "suffer" and "abnormalities" that it aligns with throughout the passage.

negative

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edge

b

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hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.