This passage shifts out of formal language into informal language. Revise the passage to
remove the instances of informal language in order to maintain a formal style throughout.
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One of the most pressing issues in our region is raising funds to expand the Wild Bird
Preserve. Currently, the preserve spans over 200 acres and is home to some six dozen
exotic or endangered avian species. Some of these species need extra-special care and
attention, such as the Tarkington meadowlark. For like 10 years all around this big old
country, the meadowlark's numbers have been dipping for a couple reasons. One, people
being super-aggressive in taking down trees in the forests. Two, polluted rivers in the
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English, 21.06.2019 12:50
How does president john f. kennedy appeal to americans’ sense of patriotism in his inaugural address? he calls on the world to maintain high expectations for the united states and its people. he insists that their enemies around the globe participate in solving the world’s problems with them. he reminds them that the united states has a long tradition of fighting for freedom at home and around the world. he asks them to establish a “new world of law” that is based on justice and not on military strength.
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English, 21.06.2019 13:30
What do other people think of the family’s tolerance for muggs behavior
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English, 21.06.2019 22:30
Constructed response paragraph: after reading “the case for short words,” do you think the author makes a convincing case that short words are effective? explain your answer and support it with evidence from the selection.
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English, 22.06.2019 02:30
When trisha saw the boys on the stage she exclaimed finally a group of students who can act
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