Read the claim. CLAIM: Having a job is a bad idea for a junior high student.
Which revision makes the claim more precise, specific, and clear?
Select one:
Having a job is a bad idea for a junior high student, because students need time to study.
Having a job is a bad idea for a junior high student, no matter what his or her GPA.
Having a job is a bad idea for a junior high student, and it always has been.
O Having a job is a bad idea for a junior high student, as everybody knows.

Ask yourself all of the following questions before you even consider submitting your essay for grading. if your answer to even one of these questions is no, then you still have some work to do. does my introduction attempt to “hook” the reader? does my essay have a clear and specific thesis statement? does my essay accurately tell my story? does my essay indicate why i’m telling my story? have i described only my own experiences? have i used the first-person point of view (the pronoun “i”) throughout the essay? have i clearly indicated where paragraphs begin and end? does each of my paragraphs support my thesis statement? does my conclusion summarize and give closure to my essay? have i effectively proofread my essay? have i met the length requirement? is my essay formatted according to the instructions?

1) each morning , dew glistens on the grass. 2) the sun yawns , scanning the horizon for companion clouds. 3) perched high ancient oak trees, startlings and sparrows announce a new day.

Hamlet act 1 what task does king claudius give to cornelius and voltemand?