They knew that all of Oz, including their own territory, was ruled by a beautiful Princess named Ozma, who live in the splendid Emerald
dityapter the simple folk of Oogaboo never visited Ozma.
The King of Oogaboo used to be a man named Jol Jemkiph Soforth,
who for many years did all the drudgery of deciding disputes and
telling his people when to plant cabbages and pickle onions. But the
King's wife had a sharp tongue and small respect for the King, her
husband; therefore one night King Jol crept over the pass into the Land
of Oz and disappeared from Oogaboo for good and all. The Queen
waited a few years for him to return and then started in search of him.
-L. Frank Baum, Tik-Tok ofOz

Read the rough draft of a student's conclusion to anargumentative editorial.(1) year-round schooling would student achievement.(2) not so much information would have to be crammed intonine months. (3) furthermore, the elimination of long breaks,particularly summer break, would significantly reduce"learning loss" and the additional time wasted at thebeginning of each academic year to reteach previouslylearned material. (4) it is clear that year-round schooling students learn and retain more. (5) the united staleis not the only country to experiment with a year-roundschool schedule. (6) although many still claim that evidenceabout year-round school and its link to higher achievement isinconclusive, these people need to open their eyes and seethat students in these schools consistently score higher oncertain assessments than students who attend schools withtraditional nine-month calendars. (7) it is about time that wereplaced our outdated and inefficient school calendars.which best revises sentence 6 to create a more appropriate and respectful tone