Fix the one word that is used incorrectly. In the passed we've always stopped at Niagara Falls on our way to Aunt Nancy's house but this year we won't have time

The word passed is wrong it should be past

Manga is a japanese comic book (sort of) while anime is the a sort of show on a screen. most animes were originally manga though

Afirefighter is a rescuer extensively trained in firefighting, primarily to extinguish hazardous fires that threaten life, property and the environment as well as to rescue people and animals from dangerous situations.  just cut some parts to make them shorter and add some of your facts or what describes them most. or what they are supposed to do.