ANWER IF YOU GET ME I'm a prisoner on the ground
With no one to stand around
People come and go
And I yell out with a moan
"Please help me
I need to be free"
But no one looks at me
For even one bit
Next thing I know
I start to get hit
I yell out loud
Out into the crowd
"Help me! Please!"
But they back away
And so I say,
"I don't have a disease!"
One moment later
The traitor comes out
And that's when I start to shout
"Traitor! Traitor! You betrayed me! Even when I was in need!"
But he just stayed still
And wouldn't move until
The guards push him away
And that's when he started to sway
Side to side he went
All the while looking content
I couldn't believe my eyes
Everything he told me were lies
I started to rise
To start to go
And wouldn't you know
He held me by the arm
Said, "I don't want to do you any harm."
The last thing I remembered
Was that he got dismembered.

pre-writing

why we feel good, or better, when we laugh?

is there a scientific explanation for this to happen?

which are the sources?

rough draft

laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings.

newport academy: endorphins reduce stress and strength social connections.

they combat anxiety and depression.

final draft

we know that when we laugh we feel better; when something is making us laugh it means we thought it was funny at some point, even if it was not meant that way. what we know is that it made us feel good. that is something we all can realize easily, but is it a chemical explanation for it to happen? of course there

according to joe bluett, laughter has a way of instantly connecting people and is one of the most basic and fundamental ways in which we communicate as human beings. also, he says that laughter can increase confidence, self-esteem, creativity, positivity and resilience, bringing positive changes to all aspects of our lives.

the newport academy says that, when we laugh, we release endorphins and that makes our body feel instantly relieved from tension and worry. endorphins also reduce stress and strength social connections.

therefor, laughter is the best to combat anxiety and depression.

as marlow travels down the river towards kurtz's inner station, their steamboat is attacked by african natives. interestingly, marlow notices that the natives are only shooting small arrows the size of twigs at the steamboat in an attempt to scare them away and halt their journey.

explanation: