Which revision would most improve this excerpt from a narrative?
Like many other 12-year-olds, Hannah loved animals. She especially
loved horses. Because her mother taught riding lessons at a nearby
barn, Hannah got to spend a lot of time caring for the horses and riding
them. Hannah considered herself lucky to even borrow other people's
horses, so she was shocked to learn that the man had left her a
beautiful mare, Diamond, in his will. She had never expected to own
her own horse!
A. Describing the barn in more detail
B. Explaining how Hannah would care for the horses
C. Introducing the character who left Hannah the horse
D. Including a resolution to the problem
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With raghu in pursuit of the other kids,the innocent game of hide and seek in anita desai games of twlight almost resembles with the hunt which three parts of the excerpt make the game sound like a hunt ?
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