Critique the following paragraph. explain where it could be improved.
"playing in the snow is...
Critique the following paragraph. explain where it could be improved.
"playing in the snow is one of my happiest childhood memories. the winter offers more than a time for kids to have fun. there are many things to do in the snow. it is unfortunate that so many people find the wintertime annoying. more people should step outside to enjoy the snow. i am glad i grew up where it snows."
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