Develop and strengthen writing as needed by planning, revising, editing, rewriting, or trying a new approach, focusing on addressing what is most significant for a specific purpose and audience.

rewrite this dull sentence to make it dazzling.

nathan listened to music.

To make a sentence more dazzling, you need to use more adjectives, active verbs, and basically present your readers with more information than just the dull sentence Nathan listened to music. It would be good to say what Nathan was like, what kind of music he listened to, why, etc. So, this could be your
Having spent 8 hours at his boring job today, tired Nathan decided to spend some sweet time enjoying the melodic tunes of his favorite music genre ever.