Which comment is an example of constructive feedback?
the ending of your essay didn’t make sense. why don’t you add something exciting?
no one enjoys reading essays about dogs. try picking a different topic—maybe something about dating.
this section isn't very descriptive. try adding more adjectives to describe your dog or his habits.
you didn’t choose the right words, so your essay wasn’t clear. can you find better ones?
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Read the passage. the dust bowl during the 1930s, extreme drought and high winds made life incredibly difficult in the great plains region of the united states. in many areas, rainfall was forty percent less than normal. the soil became extremely dry, and when strong winds blew, they created tremendous dust storms. these so-called “black blizzards” were so thick that they made daylight seem like dusk. during this terrible period, the great plains region of the united states was named the “dust bowl.” over the next few years, the drought continued, and the winds created more dust storms. in some places, the drought and high winds lasted for eight years. many people wondered if the black blizzards would ever end. which statement about this paragraph’s main idea is true? this paragraph’s main idea is stated in the topic sentence. there are not enough details to support the main idea. this paragraph’s main idea is implied. this paragraph does not express a main idea.