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English, 29.01.2020 03:54 glori1647

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the idea of this invention came to me one evening or i looked at television snuggled in my settee with a good hot chocolate cup posed on the balustrade and some delicacies to accompany it, the hands taken by my package of candy i did not know any more or to pose the things because as much of settee our arm rests which also "serves as puts back cup is not very functional and small, this evening there by lack of space, while wanting to pose my package of candy to take my cup, that ci it is reversed on our carpet. not very proud of my exploit, i undertook to clean this catastrophe while fulminating against the manufacturers of balustrade little practises. being a key with all and very handyman i put myself to think of an idea which could improve the balustrades of our settees. for having drawn several sketches, it was necessary me to think of the raw material of my future invention. i had initially thought of wood for to finally turning me to make pvc which as you know it all is less expensive and lighter than wood. i thus manufactured several prototypes before managing to find the good models to present to you.
here thus the functional balustrade of settee and armchair.
as you can see it is about a rectangular shelf of form with circles of various sizes which correspond to the shape of your containers, glass, cup, carafe, plate… it is 40 cm wide on 60 cm of length and 5 cm thickness. the raw material is pvc thus very light. you will also see two bars of fixings out of aluminium, very practical and universal allowing to adapt to any balustrade of armchair or settee in a small click. this shelf is very removable and this to transform little into plate with posed on your knees or simply turned in order to have it in front of you, it is enough for that dice to engage one of fixings and to attract the shelf with you, for the mode in front of you and two fixings for the plate mode. notice that you will also have two bars of retractable additional fixings "serving as feet to allow you to stabilize well your shelf during the different mode of uses. the small compartment that you see on the right side of the shelf serves as arranges remote controls, glasses, pens, store… you will not have any more but to install you comfortably and benefit from all the advantages which the functional balustrade of settee and armchair proposes to you. the balustrade is declined three colors standards black, white and maroon, but you have the possibility of making it manufacture with the color of your choice it is enough to specify it in the options at the time of your order.
some will certainly think that it is a quite surface gadget considering the balustrade already exists but i will tell you that mine with certain advantages that the balustrades classic do not have. finished the reversed cups, glasses and other containers since they will be fixed by the various circles envisaged with this use. moreover for the people of a certain age or moving with difficulties, plus need to rise to repetition since all to is carried with hand.
the cost of this invention remains reasonable, lower than ten euros since the raw material is pvc, very simple to go up, the time of manufacturing does not exceed twenty minutes per part and the selling price recommended according to the model is of 20 euros for a standard color with 35 euros for the optional colors.

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