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Which revision fixes the dangling modifier in this sentence?

while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, the weather was miserable.

while i was walking almost a mile to school, the weather was miserable, with wet, heavy snow.

almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow, while i was walking to school, the weather was miserable.

while walking to school almost a mile in the heavy, wet snow, the weather was miserable.

the weather was miserable while walking to school almost a mile in the wet, heavy snow.

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