What type of sentence error, if any, is found below?

he sang all alone on the stage. deserted by his sister who became suddenly ill.
fragment
comma splice
correct sentence(s)

Paragraph 1- introduction- when- wheremy favourite place is the beach. i go tothe beachthe beach islocated inthe beach isparagraph 2sightas soon as i arrive at the beach, i cansee -(noun) it is(adjectives). i can also see(noun) which isandparagraph 3- weatherparagraph 4- sight- peoplethe weather is(adjective). the sun isthere arein the sky. thetrees arei can see(people).they are(activities).(children).there are alsothey& (activitiesarefeelings).at the beach i love to hear the soundsthey make me feel(feelings).i enjoy the smell ofthehate the smellmakes me hungry.areparagraph 5soundsparagraph 6smellaroma of