Thesis statement

thesis: the creation of the united states secret endeavor, called the manhattan project, not only served as a major technological breakthrough in harnessing nuclear power but also halted the axis powers from winning world war ii.

do i need to revise my thesis statement and add in more stuff or is it good as is.

What does bittman’s style and language tell you about him?

Read the passage below and answer the question that follows. ‘you make me feel uncivilized, daisy,’ i confessed on my second glass of corky but rather impressive claret. ‘can’t you talk about crops or something? ’ i meant nothing in particular by this remark but it was taken up in an unexpected way. ‘civilization’s going to pieces,’ broke out tom violently. ‘i’ve gotten to be a terrible pessimist about things. have you read ‘the rise of the coloured empires’ by this man goddard? ’ ‘why, no,’ i answered, rather surprised by his tone. ‘well, it’s a fine book, and everybody ought to read it. the idea is if we don’t look out the white race will be—will be utterly submerged. it’s all scientific stuff; it’s been proved.’ in this passage, tom’s ideas about race relations come off as uncivilized. what literary device is fitzgerald using here? irony personification metaphor simile

"she is his achilles' heel" is an example question 3 options: a allusion b alliteration c simile d personification