Which comment is an example of constructive feedback?
a. the ending of your essay didn’t make sense. why don’t you add something exciting?
b. no one enjoys reading essays about dogs. try picking a different topic—maybe something about dating.
c. this section isn't very descriptive. try adding more adjectives to describe your dog or his habits.
d. you didn’t choose the right words, so your essay wasn’t clear. can you find better ones?

"now they have beaten me, he thought. i am too old to club sharks to death. but i will try it as long as i have the oars and the short club and the tiller."? this passage shows santiago's belief that a. he will never fish again. b. he is too old to continue fishing. c. man can be defeated but not destroyed. d. the sharks got the best of him.

Essay why are rules important in school

Read the passage. (1) the first skateboard was constructed of old roller-skate wheels attached to a piece of wood. (2) improvements were made to the skateboard in 1959. (3) the year that the first commercially made skateboard appeared. (4) soon after, skateboarding began to grow in popularity. (5) in 1963, skateboard manufacturers formed the first professional skateboarding team. (6) that same year, the first organized skateboard competition took place, in california. which is the most effective way to correct the fragment in sentence 3? attach the fragment to sentence 4. attach the fragment to sentence 2. insert the phrase in the united states to the end of the fragment. insert the verb had before the verb appeared.