Which is the best example of a compare and contrast structure?
a- soccer and american football are both ball games. an oval ball is used in football, while a spherical ball is used in soccer.
b- ryan and allan have lunch together. they bring lunch from home.
c- centralized air conditioning is often blamed for the excessive use of energy resources in offices.
d- the planet jupiter is known to have extremely violent and harsh atmospheric conditions.

hmm, sadly there is no dialogue. there is no place in the story where he is talking to anyone. it's more of just describing what he eats and where he sleeps. you have to become anne frank, give details of where you are, what other folks look like, how the environment is. have a little bit of dialogue tell of what people are specifically saying. anne frank talked about her entire household including the people, the objects, the lighting, the food they ate, and even the smell in the air. there has to be more to your diary entries, the whole story in its current state is only about peter van daan, the food, the sounds, and where he sleeps. also he seems to be writing only once a year yet more than that happened from day to day. for a friend, i can you write it out, if you want.

in my opinion, anyone should be allowed to marry as long as it's not going against any laws. though i kind of contradict myself because i know that in some states and countries, gay marriage isn't legal yet- hopefully you get my point.