What should i change in this poem?
it's called missing identity
when i see my true loves face
i always think i'm hallucinating
i smiled and i waved but he doesn't even look my way
i said hi.
but he acted like i wasn't even there!
when i went home in despair
i looked at my self in the mirror.
i saw half of my face
but the other half was blurry and then disappeared
i looked away
i couldn't bear the fact
i looked in the mirror
but i still saw only half of my face
i don't know who i am
i don't know who i am
do you i have an identity
what do i have to live for?
who am i
who am i to even look at such a beautiful face like his?
who am i to even talk to him?
i have to find my missing identity.
i need to find who i am.
i me to find out why i'm living
i need to find my fate
what is my identity?
can you me find it?
i need to get the other half of my soul.
what is my identity?
what is my fate?
who will be my destined love
that will love me forever.