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This is really great But U should give them a little more details than ur done ☑

This is great!
I am actually homeschooled myself and agree completely with your paper. Ok, so you use the word Home-schooled or Homeschooling. Maybe you can try a different phrase, such as:

Students who work from home
Those who are not a part of a brick and mortar school are able to

Another thing is i noticed that you have some pretty long sentences, so try to fit in a few comas in there or make the sentences shorter.

This is what i found “an elliptical clause is a type of dependent, or subordinate, clause that is missing a word or words. often, the missing part is a verb or verb phrase. while elliptical clauses are acceptable to use, they can sometimes cause confusion for writers and readers, especially when the sentence ends with a pronoun.” i hope this you for what your looking for. can you plz mark me brainliest?