Romeo and juliet persuasive essay
i have to persuade someone that if romeo and juliet were actually in love or they were crushing really hard.
can someone read my introduction for my persuasive essay and give feedback:
"real love is when you are completely committed to someone; /real love is not based on romance." romeo and juliet are star-crossed lovers who love each other at first sight and become married the next day. in romeo and juliet, by william shakespeare, two families feud with each other while to teenagers from opposite families fall in love and get married which leads them to die together.

this is what i have so far.

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