Which revision would make the advertisement more persuasive?

well to make a good avertisment you have to sell it. buy that i mean make i candy make your logo pop, interesting to look at, modern, but also simple. Make sure you use correct grammer, and also make it seem like if you don't have you are not worth anything

well people will have to mark your answer as the best answer. and from that u receive crowns.

~batmans wife dun dun