When a reader evaluates an author’s style, the reader

memorizes passages of interest.
adopts an attitude toward the text.
summarizes the main topics in the text.
judges it in a careful and thoughtful way.

judges it in a careful and thoughtful way.

When evaluating an author's style, the reader has to make sure that he remains as neutral as possible before the evaluation. Prejudice can make us adopt an attitude toward the text that will cause our views to be unfairly biased. It is not necessary to memorize passages of interest in order to evaluate an author's style. Finally, an evaluation should be more than a simple summary of the text. It requires a judgement on the methods that the author uses in order to convey a message. This judgement needs to be performed in a careful and thoughtful way.

the sentence that avoid faulty coordination is:

culture, which is well represented in philadelphia, plays a major role including theatre, music, and the visual arts.  

faulty coordination occurs when the writer gives equal importance two different ideas (clauses) which in fact are not equivalent. in order to correct a misplaced clause or idea, the writer can place less important or emphatic ideas in a relative clause as in the previous sentence.  

yes, because if hes blind not deaf