Which choice best describes the sentence and explains how to improve it? took crayons and made beautiful, homemade get-well cards for the children in the hospital. this sentence is complete and correct. it does not need any revision. this is a comma splice. add a conjunction after the comma and before the word homemade. this is a fragment without a predicate. add a verb to show what the subject is doing. this is a fragment without a subject. add to the beginning to show who was doing the action.

How many times do you read a text when you use the close reading model?i am desperate

Read the following conclusion for an essay that claims that extreme sports should be more highly regulated because they are too dangerous: whether it is a high level of physical exertion, or extra doses of the "fear factor," it is common for extreme athletes to beat at the door of fate. it is these people who tempt their own mortality, while curious onlookers wait anxiously for the outcome, who must be protected from themselves. which statement provides the most accurate evaluation of the paragraph? a. the closing statement is unsatisfying b. the passage introduces new evidence. c. the thesis is not restated. d. the style is informal and inconsistent.

Elist of items that aditi is planning to include in her narrative essay. 1. i stayed after school once to work on a monologue with a teacher. 2. i learned about the audition for the spring musical at my school. 3. i realized that i need to practice more if i really want a role. 4. i went to the audition and barely remembered all my lines. what is the best order for these items? 1, 3, 2, 4 1, 2, 4, 3 2, 4, 3, 1 2, 1, 4, 3