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English, 29.01.2020 06:06 abbydamaso1097

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the football team was looking forward to their first win when the team was disappointed as the quarterback fumbled.

what is the best way to revise this sentence to create an active, vivid picture for the reader?

a. looking forward to their first win, the football team was disappointed as the quarterback fumbled.
b. anticipating their first victory, the football team's hopes crumbled when the quarterback fumbled.
c. when the quarterback fumbled, the football team that was looking forward to their first win suffered a severe disappointment.
d. the football team was looking forward to their first win, but the quarterback fumbled, and the team lost.

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