Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

we hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.
we sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.
we had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.
we stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

C. We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.

C. We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.

We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there is your aswer.

All the other sentences contain verbs of manner of movement which accurately describe the movement being performed (hiked, sprinted back and forth, streched and slowly jogged).   These sentences also contain PPs (prepositional phrases) denoting the exact location where the movement takes place (in the blooming forest, in the stuffy high school gym, around the track). The NPs are also modified by AdjPs which also add more information about the location. It is a "stuffy high school gym", not only a "high school gym".

The third option is your answer because it is not as descriptive as the other sentences. It contains the word "several" which means "more than two but not many", so you can't tell really how many flights of stairs they walked up. The location is also vague because it is referred with the PP "there" which does not evoke a particular place.  

We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there is your aswer.

All the other sentences contain verbs of manner of movement which accurately describe the movement being performed (hiked, sprinted back and forth, streched and slowly jogged).   These sentences also contain PPs (prepositional phrases) denoting the exact location where the movement takes place (in the blooming forest, in the stuffy high school gym, around the track). The NPs are also modified by AdjPs which also add more information about the location. It is a "stuffy high school gym", not only a "high school gym".

The third option is your answer because it is not as descriptive as the other sentences. It contains the word "several" which means "more than two but not many", so you can't tell really how many flights of stairs they walked up. The location is also vague because it is referred with the PP "there" which does not evoke a particular place.  

malvolio only loves olivia because he thinks if they get married to olivia he will have a noble title, people to serve him, and fine clothes to wear. also he thinks if they get married he will have many expensive things, and he thinks he will be able to order toby around. malvolio only wants to be noble and boss people around he dose not really love olivia. but viola love for duke orsino is real she really loves orsino.

i think he will fail because he tried to get her to love him and she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool. so i think she knows what malvolio is trying to do. she knows that he only wants to marry her because he wants to be noble and boss people around so that it why i think she said oh, you are sick of self-love, malvolio. there is no slander in an allowed fool because she new he was selfish.

there are several different forms of presenting this; each has a very specific format. plays have a very simple format; teleplays, for television shows, or screenplays, for movies, have more complex and strict rules for formatting.

drama

the first of these to be written for the express purpose of being performed were created by the greeks. many of our modern terms derive from greek origins.

comedy

in the greek sense, a play that doesn't end in death. in modern usage, refers to a play that is humorous.

tragedy

in the greek sense, a play that ends with the death of at least one of the main characters. in modern usage, refers to a play that doesn't have a happy ending.