How's my essay so far?

i'm applying for a florida youth advisory council and one of the requirements is to write an essay on traits that i have that's been the biggest asset to me in leadership situations. i only have two paragraphs (one if you're not counting the intro), but i'd very much appreciate feedback on it so far before i continue writing. thnk yu

You seal resign myself to you also i guess what you mean, i behold from the beach your crooked inviting fingers, i believe you refuse to go back without feeling of me, we must have a turn together, i undress, hurry me out of sight of the land, cushion me soft, rock me in billowy drowse, dash me with amorous wet, i can repay you. in this excerpt from "song of myself," which literary device does whitman use to address the sea? alliteration allusion apostrophe onomatopoeia