Read the paragraph from sora’s narrative essay. that day after practice, i was frustrated and stomped home. in fact, i’m embarrassed to say i sulked for the rest of the day. then my stubborn streak kicked in, and i decided that failure wasn’t an option. i practiced regularly until the day came when i was able to consistently hit the ball. which sentence from the paragraph best supports the conclusion that this paragraph belongs in the middle of sora’s essay? that day after practice, i was frustrated and stomped home. in fact, i’m embarrassed to say i sulked for the rest of the day. then my stubborn streak kicked in, and i decided that failure wasn’t an option. i practiced regularly until the day came when i was able to consistently hit the ball.

faulty parallelism is a grammar construction where there is no balance in the parts of a sentence they have a similar meaning but the grammar structure is not equivalent.

the correct version of this faulty parallelism in the sentence is:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation's third president.

the problem with the first version is that the sentence:

"jefferson was both the writer of the declaration of independence"

presents jefferson as both a subject and an agent for the verb "write" because if he was "the writer" then the declaration of independence was written by him, besides that fact, the sentence presents a dependent clause.

while the second sentence:

he was the nation's third president.

presents a basic subject+verb+object structure

so, to give a proper balance to the structure, or better said, to give a parallel structure, we must write a basic s+v+o structure in both sentences:

jefferson wrote the declaration of independence, and he was the nation third president.

one reason summer auggie is because she is kind, and the whole "boy war" between jack will and julian was probaly thinking her to be on auggies sode and if you read auggie and me,   she was nice to auggie because julian was mean and auggie needed some freinds. hope this