Monty is writing an argumentative text about not having exotic animals as pets. A classmate read an excerpt and suggested that Monty needs to strengthen his credibility. What are two changes Monty can make to strengthen the credibility of his paper?

Include direct quotes from animal experts about the cost and care of exotic pets.
Use stronger transitions between ideas.
Include facts about laws related to owning exotic animals.
Remove information about pet sanctuaries.
Share a personal story about visiting a zoo.

Read the following passage: he roamed from chamber to chamber with hurried, unequal, and objectless step. the pallor of his countenance had assumed, if possible, a more ghastly hue— but the luminousness of his eye had utterly gone out. the once occasional huskiness of his tone was heard no more; and a tremulous quaver, as if of extreme terror, habitually characterized his utterance. there were times, indeed, when i thought his unceasingly agitated mind was laboring with some oppressive secret, to divulge which he struggled for the necessary courage. which of the above ideas might be considered foreshadowing? he is wandering all over the chamber his skin tone is really pale his voice is quivering the narrator thinks he is laboring with an oppressive secret