I need some advice and/or opinions on my thesis statement of the essay i am doing for the book The Chrysalids. I'm following the event+response=outcome

the essay is about how do individuals respond to fear of change btw

thesis: In the novel, "The Chrysalids", by John Wyndham, the author develops the idea that when individuals fear change it causes conflicts and lack of acceptance, which results in living in constant violence and concern of their lives, leading to the isolation and struggles that they ultimately face.​