() Hiring Jane for a position in your restaurant is a wise decision that will prove beneficial to all. (2) With her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, she'll be
totally great. (3) As her previous employer, I have often seen her take
personal responsibility for solving problems - even those caused by
others. (4) Furthermore, customers frequently praised her for making a
great effort to ensure that they had a positive experience (5) Hiring
Jane will prove to be a decision nobody will regret.
Which option best revises this paragraph to maintain a formal tone
throughout?
O A. Replace sentence 4 with: Furthermore, patrons of the
establishment lauded Jane habitually for making a prodigious
attempt to ensure that they had a positive experience.
OB. Replace sentence 3 with: As her previous employer, Jane was
often seen taking personal responsibility for problems, including
those that were caused by others,
O C. Replace sentence 2 with: With her superior organizational skills,
ability to relate to others, and general sense of responsibility, Jane
is an ideal candidate for this position
OD Replace sentence 1 with: Hiring Jane for a position in your
restaurant is an awesome decision for you.
Moo