Read the paragraph below. Which would be the most helpful peer review comment to make about the paragraph’s words and sentences? Wolves are a familiar animal in stories and movies. They are usually the bad animal. Some people think wolves are dangerous to people. But is this the truth? Wolves eat sheep and people don’t like that because they’re raising the sheep for themselves and some wolves can even take down cattle. Wolves make scary howls that can frighten people. But a sound can’t hurt you!
1.“I like your sentences about wolves, especially the ones where you describe how scary they are.”
2.“Your fifth sentence has some interesting ideas. But too many of them! You need to make this sentence several different sentences.”
3.“I think wolves are scary, too. You’ll have to do more to convince me that they’re not!”
4.“You use the word “wolf” a lot. Can you find a more interesting way to say “wolf”?”

1. read the following excerpt from franklin d. roosevelt's "fireside chat 19":

on the other side of the picture, we must learn also to know that guerilla warfare against the germans in, let us say serbia or norway, us; that a successful russian offensive against the germans us; and that british successes on land or sea in any part of the world strengthen our hands.

remember always that germany and italy, regardless of any formal declaration of war, consider themselves at war with the united states at this moment just as much as they consider themselves at war with britain or russia. and germany puts all the other republics of the americas into the same category of enemies. the people of our sister republics of this hemisphere can be honored by that fact.  

the true goal we seek is far above and beyond the ugly field of battle. when we resort to force, as now we must, we are determined that this force shall be directed toward ultimate good as well as against immediate evil. we americans are not destroyers — we are builders.

analyze the effectiveness of this excerpt. how does it function within the speech as a whole? how does the structure of the excerpt to convey the speech's purpose and key points? support your argument with evidence from the speech. (10 points)

the answer is sail boat won the race , and it was going 8 feet per   second

direct object would be the answer